Ethan, Your idea is good. I do see a story here. However, I don't feel it is strong enough.
To improve your grade, you could... 1. make sure the viewer knows that Bri and Chris are SECURITY GUARDS somehow. They don't seem like guards here. You have to infer it. 2. Think WAY more artistically.... Take photos from all different angles. Think about the rule of 3rds. Think about simplifying the background. 3. Strengthen your story by making sure the viewer knows that what is in the silver tray is valuable. Perhaps you need a new 1st photo that shows this. 4. The 2nd photo is completely unnecessary.
Either fix this idea...or retake a different idea.
Ethan,
ReplyDeleteYour idea is good. I do see a story here. However, I don't feel it is strong enough.
To improve your grade, you could...
1. make sure the viewer knows that Bri and Chris are SECURITY GUARDS somehow. They don't seem like guards here. You have to infer it.
2. Think WAY more artistically.... Take photos from all different angles. Think about the rule of 3rds. Think about simplifying the background.
3. Strengthen your story by making sure the viewer knows that what is in the silver tray is valuable. Perhaps you need a new 1st photo that shows this.
4. The 2nd photo is completely unnecessary.
Either fix this idea...or retake a different idea.